Wednesday, August 26, 2009

feste

on blue and gold days let's remember gray ones
let's remember shipwrecks while we swim
and purchase diamonds on a whim - 

let's mess up and drown
we'll burst right back dressed up in masks
that slowly strip to shreds and we'll be prettier -

all our promises will luckily be lies and
yes, we'll explode far into the future
roaring like bears and eating music


4 comments:

the unholy atlantic said...

re: vampires - hellz yeah, the whole idea is nothing but violent. vampires are a different species. they're supposed to be animals. i don't know how it got to edward cullen. whyyyyyyyy

p.s. this poem makes me feel like cliff diving

Ianthe Wilde said...

this poem is AWESOME. LET'S GO CLIFF DIVING.

the unholy atlantic said...

1. cliff diving IS awesome. that was what i meant. however, if cliff diving meant edward cullen would come back to me, then lets never do it ever.
2. i use punctuation occasionally. you could try and look for some of my non-shitty poems avec punctuation and see if there's a common thread.

Coweh said...

THIS IS SO AWESOME. how on earth can you think that anything i've ever written is better?